The Webb Legacy [updated with Ch. 11 4/17]

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The Webb Legacy [updated with Ch. 11 4/17]

Postby Ilona on January 13th, 2008, 7:42 pm

After a long break from legacies, and the sims, I've come back with a new legacy. My last one was killed when my computer fried, and this one gets the privilege of being the first on on my new computer, yay good graphics! Well, here's chapter one. Check it out, I'd love to know what you think, I'm trying a completely different writing style than what I've always tried.


Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
Chapter Six
Chapter Seven
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12

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Re: The Webb Legacy

Postby 80's Waffle Guy on January 13th, 2008, 7:52 pm

Wow. This is good. This is really good. I can't find an obvious flaw to point out and mock you for. I have no witty thinly veiled insults for this piece of work. Good job.
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Re: The Webb Legacy

Postby Glory5641 on January 13th, 2008, 9:02 pm

Great start. I really liked this. Can't wait for the nest chapter, keep up the good work. :)
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Re: The Webb Legacy

Postby Ilona on January 14th, 2008, 5:03 pm

Really? Thanks a bunch. I was afraid it was too corny, so I'm glad you guys liked it.
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Re: The Webb Legacy

Postby Bree on January 14th, 2008, 6:39 pm

I really like your writing style, It kept me very interested in the story. Keep up the great work!
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Re: The Webb Legacy

Postby Ilona on January 16th, 2008, 6:01 pm

Thanks Bree. I don't know when my next update will be, my Calculus teacher has gone insane and assigning tons more homework than usual, and English is coming in second, so I don't have as much time as I want to play, but I'll do my best to find time without suffering in school. I'm thinking within the next month, but not too soon.
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Re: The Webb Legacy

Postby leaths on January 24th, 2008, 11:14 pm

I enjoyed your first chapter. And you have a good backstory which could provide some interesting stories in the future. I'll stay on the look out for Chapter 2.
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Re: The Webb Legacy [updated 3/15]

Postby Ilona on April 13th, 2008, 5:42 pm

After two long months, I finally sat down and typed Chapter Two. Enjoy! Chapter three is already in the making, I'm much farther ahead in playing than in writing.

And now, I have Chapter 3 out too. These college years were... eventful.
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Re: The Webb Legacy [updated with Ch. 3 4/13]

Postby leaths on May 13th, 2008, 10:18 pm

Hi. I guess I lost track of your story because I didn't realize that you had updated it since I last posted.

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I read both chapters tonight and I must say all of the boys are easy on the eyes, but Brad is especially yum. I had a feeling that something was up with Don when he kept hanging around. I hope that the secret stays that way. Although it doesn't seem fair that after being such a great husband, Jason doesn't even get to have one of his own chilren carry on the legacy. I guess that's why I hope he doesn't find out. It's better to let him die happy, I think.
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Re: The Webb Legacy [updated with Ch. 3 4/13]

Postby monky135 on July 1st, 2008, 12:04 pm

I loved it!

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"You sent me down here for a dog? I thought that was Jimmy's job! You know I specialize in untimely deaths! What do I say to a dying dog?"

"..."

"Just read page 9 of the handbook? We have a handbook?"

"..."

"Oh, okay, I found it, right in my rib cage."


I thought that was soo funny! The plot in this story is very realistic, I loved it. One of my favorites so far!
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Re: The Webb Legacy [updated with Ch. 4 8/1]

Postby Ilona on August 1st, 2008, 7:48 pm

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it, I enjoy playing this family. That's prolly one of my favorite parts too!

I FINALLY updated with Chapter 4. It only took me three months, but I think I have a good defense... May was AP Test and finals month, and June and July I was on a two month vacation in Europe, and my dad's laptop hates the legacy hood, I could only play my other neighborhoods. So when I came back, I got back to playing, and here's the newest update.
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Re: The Webb Legacy [updated with Ch. 4 8/1]

Postby purple on August 6th, 2008, 11:02 am

I really like this! The 4th chapter was my favorite.
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The doggy sub-plot is awesome *dog*
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Re: The Webb Legacy [updated with Ch. 4 8/1]

Postby yentix on August 6th, 2008, 11:59 am

just wanted 2 say ur legacy is awsome and keep up the good work :D :)
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Re: The Webb Legacy [updated with Ch. 4 8/1]

Postby Ilona on November 16th, 2008, 3:35 pm

Finally updated with Chapter 5. Check it out!

Sorry for the long delay, school is taking up all of my time. I've got most of my college apps submitted though, so time is getting better. The next chapter might take a little while simply because I need to do a rebuild.
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Re: The Webb Legacy [updated with Ch. 5 11/16]

Postby zed18 on November 16th, 2008, 6:06 pm

I like it a lot! But something kinda freaked me out... *boggled*
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So, my elementary school English teacher was Ms.Webb And one of my best friends is named Elise. Wierd... *shifty*But anywho, I liked it a lot! The kids are cute! :)

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Re: The Webb Legacy [updated with Ch. 5 11/16]

Postby Ilona on November 23rd, 2008, 9:59 am

Thanks!

Izzy, I was actually inspired by a vice principal who's last name was Webb. I thinks her name was Elise, or Eloise or Lois... dunno, but I always thought it was Elise Webb. I just really wanted to use Webb as a last name, in reference to how intertwined the family tree may get later in the game, and had name block for Elise's name.
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Re: The Webb Legacy [updated with Ch. 5 11/16]

Postby lucyfilmmaker on January 10th, 2009, 2:27 pm

I love the voice you use, and your shots are really well composed. Can't wait to read the next part!
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Re: The Webb Legacy [updated with Ch. 6 03/07]

Postby Ilona on March 7th, 2009, 9:27 pm

Thanks Lucy! I took photography for two years in school, and I at least absorbed a sense of composition.

Chapter Six is FINALLY out. I'll try my best to get the next chapter in a more timely fashion, but that's obviously not a promise I'm good at keeping. Enjoy!
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Re: The Webb Legacy [updated with Ch. 7 03/25]

Postby Ilona on March 25th, 2009, 5:32 pm

Just uploaded Chapter Seven barely minutes ago. Had a lot of time to play and really enjoyed this chapter. Enjoy!
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Re: The Webb Legacy [updated with Ch. 7 03/25]

Postby lorind on April 5th, 2009, 6:39 pm

I have read through Ch 4 so far. I see we think a bit alike we both love the drama!! :D

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I was really surprised that Elise had an affair with Don!And Bad brad sleeping with his brother's girl!! 2 romance sims to put through college that must have been a huge challenge! I am glad that Brad decided to stop being a jerk to poor Roxi. I have a huge soft spot for Cam and was hoping he would be heir but I do think in the long run Brad was the right choice he keeps things interesting! I'll have a better comment tomorrow once I am all caught up and I am hoping to find that you eventually get some girls! I don't think I have ever seen such testosterone!
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