The Rahmani Legacy Updated 9/4 Chap 8.7

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The Rahmani Legacy Updated 9/4 Chap 8.7

Postby meowbark on June 22nd, 2009, 6:42 pm

I wanted to be a little original and based my founder as an alien with a contract to fulfill. Please note that this legacy is very plotty, especially after chapter one. I have chosen to follow the alphabet to make it easier on me to keep track of generations. Unlike most legacies, I refer to the deceased often. I love my ghosts (Akiho, Blasius, and Dachi).

Current Legacy Household with Traits
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Fiamma - generation 6 heir. (heavy sleeper, clumsy, snob, neat, vegetarian)
Galen - generation 7. (slob, loner, genius, bookworm)
Gene - generation 7.
Jeri - married to Gene. (good, perceptive, hopeless romantic, photographic eye, virtuoso)
Harmony - generation 8. daughter of Gene and Jeri. (easily impressed, good, natural cook)
Hiero - generation 8. son of Gene and Jeri. (heavy sleeper, clumsy, photographic eye)
Hoku - generation 8 heir. daughter of Genesis and Jean Claude. (absent-minded, insane, eccentric)

Relatives
Claudio - grandson of Frida. son of Krissy.
Fedele - generation 6. (excitable, friendly, heavy sleeper, charismatic)
Finn - generation 6. (genius, light sleeper, good, flirty)
Frida - generation 6. (slob, loner, klepto, childish, over emotional)
Krissy - daughter of Frida. (ambitious. friendly, light sleeper, mooch, athletic)
Latrice - daughter of Frida. (artistic, computer whiz, evil, clumsy, vegetarian)
Lea - great grandaughter of Dhanya from generation 4. (slob, lucky, party animal, daredevil)


Chapters
Chapter 1.1: Attention
Chapter 1.2: Rummage
Chapter 1.3 Offspring
Chapter 1.4 3/4th of a Family
Chapter 1.5 One Less to Feed
Chapter 1.6 Confession

Chapter 2.1 Bells are Ringing
Chapter 2.2 Mandatory Leave
Chapter 2.3 Improvements
Chapter 2.4 Together
Chapter 2.5 Confrontation
Chapter 2.6 Apparition
Chapter 2.7 Surprise
Chapter 2.8 Ghost

Chapter 3.1 Left Behind
Chapter 3.2 Uncle
Chapter 3.3 Wasn't Me
Chapter 3.4 Six Feet From the Edge
Chapter 3.5 One Potato Two Potato
Chapter 3.6 Water
Chapter 3.7 Premonition

Chapter 4.1 Beautiful Nightmare
Chapter 4.2 Three's a Crowd
Chapter 4.3 Secrets
Chapter 4.4 Checkmate
Chapter 4.5 Big Bad Wolf
Chapter 4.6 Fly on the Wall

Chapter 5.1 Daughter to Father
Chapter 5.2 Good Vibrations
Chapter 5.3 Battlefield
Chapter 5.4 Uninvited Guest
Chapter 5.5 Shattered Trust
Chapter 5.6 Countdown

Chapter 6.1 Temper of a Toddler
Chapter 6.2 Determination
Chapter 6.3 Walking a Fine Line
Chapter 6.4 Dance with the Devil
Chapter 6.5 Mirror Mirror
Chapter 6.6 The Weakest Link
Chapter 6.7 The Littlest Things

Chapter 7.1 Mission Impossible
Chapter 7.2 All I Ask of You
Chapter 7.3 Protection
Chapter 7.4 For Every Action
Chapter 7.5 Search for Nirvana
Chapter 7.6 Deja Vu

Chapter 8.1 Detachment
Chapter 8.2 A Birthday Wish
Chapter 8.3 Runaway Train
Chapter 8.4 Peas in a Pod
Chapter 8.5 Nothing is Certain
Chapter 8.6 Ogres are like Onions
Chapter 8.7 Pinch Me
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Re: The Rahmani Legacy Updated 6/22 Chap 1.3

Postby PrincessMajestic on June 23rd, 2009, 7:12 am

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This has to be one of the best legacies I've ever read. The plot is such a good idea, and you make the story intelligent and mirthful.


"Lance went back to writing his book The Tiny Jigga. The fourth book in the Jigga series after Jigga Please, Jigga on the Left, and Jigga in the West."

That has to be my favorite part.


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Re: The Rahmani Legacy Updated 6/23 Chap 1.4

Postby meowbark on June 23rd, 2009, 9:59 am

I'm glad you enjoy reading it. To be honest, I have more fun writing her story then I do playing the game. Chapter 1.4 is now up.
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Re: The Rahmani Legacy Updated 6/23 Chap 1.4

Postby PrincessMajestic on June 23rd, 2009, 10:21 am

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Another marvelous chapter, as expected. The talk with Basha was heartwarming. *sing*
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Re: The Rahmani Legacy Updated 6/23 Chap 1.4

Postby ArchimedesMinor on June 23rd, 2009, 11:11 am

Now this is a legacy that shows writing talent. I enjoyed every word. Can't wait for the next chapter, I'm now off to vote :)
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Re: The Rahmani Legacy Updated 6/23 Chap 1.4

Postby meowbark on June 23rd, 2009, 4:04 pm

@ Princess + Archimedes - Glad you liked it. :D


BTW, Chap 1.3 was annoying the hell out of me with its clutter so I completely redesigned the page (no context/picture changes). This isn't an update but an FYI for those wondering why that particular chapter looks different.
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Re: The Rahmani Legacy Updated 6/23 Chap 1.4

Postby Glory5641 on June 23rd, 2009, 4:52 pm

I just love your story, and it's so well written. I am really looking forward to reading the next chapters. :D
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Re: The Rahmani Legacy Updated 6/23 Chap 1.4

Postby meowbark on June 23rd, 2009, 11:38 pm

Glory5641 wrote:I just love your story, and it's so well written. I am really looking forward to reading the next chapters. :D


Got one more loose end to tie up before I announce the heir. So expect a chapter tommorow before the poll closes.
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Re: The Rahmani Legacy Updated 6/23 Chap 1.4

Postby meowbark on June 24th, 2009, 6:18 pm

Chapter 1.5 is up! Next post will be about the heir.
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Re: The Rahmani Legacy Updated 6/23 Chap 1.4

Postby PrincessMajestic on June 24th, 2009, 6:39 pm

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Oooo, a fight! :D Bacillo is a bit of a donkey's rear-end, isn't he? This generation is growing up quickly- one minute they're toddlers, the next they're all adults.
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Re: The Rahmani Legacy Updated 6/23 Chap 1.4

Postby meowbark on June 24th, 2009, 7:03 pm

PrincessMajestic wrote:
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Oooo, a fight! :D Bacillo is a bit of a donkey's rear-end, isn't he? This generation is growing up quickly- one minute they're toddlers, the next they're all adults.


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Both Beila and Bacillo are still teenagers in this. Well, after Bacillo and Beila got in a fight; I gave her a b-day party, her age up was the next day. Bacillo the following day; he was born three days after her, the message popped so allowed =P. I quickly had him get engaged/married to Rebecca Goth (they were already boyfriend/girlfriend)to lessen the load on the household and make room for generation 3.) I like how you can chose which people can go to each household for marriages. Since no one came into the household, we didn't get any extra money. So no penalty for marrying someone rich imo. Trying to keep it legit =P

Wait till you see what Beila decided as her lifetime wish! I'll give you a hint. It had nothing to do with her 6 cooking points. /grumble
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Re: The Rahmani Legacy Updated 6/24 Chap 1.5

Postby shella4711 on June 25th, 2009, 11:19 am

Your legacy's really interesting. I'll definitely add it to my list of legacies to follow.
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Re: The Rahmani Legacy Updated 6/25 Chap 1.6

Postby meowbark on June 25th, 2009, 4:44 pm

Chapter 1.6 is up.

/hate LiveJournal for making my update take 2 hours longer than needed and for making me rewrite this twice.

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I thought vegetarians were suppose to have longer lives. I didn't get to fulfil either hers or her husbands LTW. /sigh. Good thing I'm not going for points. This chapter changed drastically from what I wanted to do. But as is the life of the Sims. Always the unexpected.

And that was the first fire of the household. Akiho had 9 cooking points but she decided to take a nap halfway through and her pie almost burnt down the housee.
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Re: The Rahmani Legacy Updated 6/25 Chap 1.6

Postby meowbark on June 26th, 2009, 3:05 pm

Chapter 2.1 is up!
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Re: The Rahmani Legacy Updated 6/26 Chap 2.1

Postby shella4711 on June 26th, 2009, 11:16 pm

Great update! It'll be interesting to see how this legacy plays out in later generations.
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Re: The Rahmani Legacy Updated 6/27 Chap 2.2

Postby meowbark on June 27th, 2009, 9:24 am

Chapter 2.2 is up!

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You know its funny that the only two people born with semi-normal skintone end up insane.

A funny side story while I was playing:
So, Basha invited her boss Shelby Sweeney over. I found out that you can't get promoted if you're on pregnancy leave. So no raises. Nothing. And then Mr. Sweeney decided to die in my nursery with his daughter Catherine Sweeney in the background. I was like, PLEASE don't leave me with another child! OMG!
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About two hours after her father died she went POOF!

EDIT: Brandt turned elder the day after the wedding. Had to pop these kids out before he croaked.
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Re: The Rahmani Legacy Updated 6/27 Chap 2.2

Postby MedleyMisty on June 27th, 2009, 2:08 pm

Just finished readng all of it. I haven't seen any other legacies written like that - very creative and unique.

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Were you upset when your founder died?

The girls all look so interesting! I can't wait to see them grown up.
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Re: The Rahmani Legacy Updated 6/27 Chap 2.2

Postby meowbark on June 27th, 2009, 4:16 pm

MedleyMisty wrote:Just finished readng all of it. I haven't seen any other legacies written like that - very creative and unique.

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Were you upset when your founder died?

The girls all look so interesting! I can't wait to see them grown up.


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Not upset but extremely shock. I feel like I let her down. She died so young without completing her lifetime want. I thought I had another week or two because she was a vegetarian. Guess not :(

I love the way the did ghosts in this game. Because it feels like I still have her when I see her in the house doing her favorite things. All the other characters have gotten so used to seeing her and Lane, they don't even come up with the "A GHOST" pop up. Akiho doesn't come out as much as Lane. Lane is out every single night and all he wants to do is dance to that stupid boombox. Though, a hint. You can have one of the other sims ask the ghost to clean up the house. Handy.
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Re: The Rahmani Legacy Updated 6/27 Chap 2.2

Postby hrootbeer on June 27th, 2009, 4:26 pm

The babies are all so cute! I love it when the skin tone isn't blue...seems like such an oddity. Aren't the genetic features fun!
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Re: The Rahmani Legacy Updated 6/27 Chap 2.2

Postby meowbark on June 27th, 2009, 9:51 pm

hrootbeer wrote:The babies are all so cute! I love it when the skin tone isn't blue...seems like such an oddity. Aren't the genetic features fun!


Yeah, I'm hoping it will last all 10 generations although Beila ended up being quite the hottie: http://i610.photobucket.com/albums/tt18 ... ot-538.jpg

Also, in case anyone was wondering what the house looked like. I have front and back pictures. I don't include the floorplans in the story cause its edited so often. And, I absolutely hate the siding and windows but the family doesn't have the finances right now to do what I really want. Heh, I have this awesome floorplan from HousePlans.com; hopefully I can impliment it by generation 4.

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